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SOPHIE
SMITH
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Dreams of being a
fashion designer.
'SOPHTIQUE
MAISON' V1.0
MISS
OCEAN, JHL & CLEANER OCEAN FOUNDATION LTD.
Copyright © 10 January 2026 All rights reserved.
(1st draft aiming
80 - 90 page script adaptation)
OUR
STORY BEGINS - ONCE UPON A TIME
SCENE
1 - THE
SUPERSTORE BLUES
INT.
TESCO EASTBOURNE
– DAY
A cavernous supermarket bathed in cold fluorescent light. The hum of the
bulbs is relentless, oppressive — a mechanical heartbeat.
BEEP. BEEP. BEEP.
SOPHIE SMITH (20), bright-eyed but worn down, scans items with the
precision of someone who’s been doing this far too long. Her polyester
uniform hangs awkwardly, refusing to flatter.
She forces a smile as MRS. WILSON, a cheerful older woman, approaches with
a trolley full of beans.
SOPHIE
Hello, Mrs Wilson. Stocking up on the beans today?
MRS. WILSON
Oh, you know how it is, Sophie. The boys eat like wolves. Growing like
weeds, they are.
Sophie smiles — a real one — but before she can reply, a shadow falls
over her till.
The temperature drops.
DEREK DILLINGER, the store manager, appears. His hair is gelled into a
helmet, his clipboard clutched like a sceptre of doom.
DEREK
Miss Smith.
Sophie stiffens.
DEREK
This isn’t a social club. Less jawing, more clawing.
Focus on the barcodes, not the biography of the customers.
Mrs. Wilson gives Sophie a sympathetic look. Sophie lowers her gaze.
SOPHIE
Yes, Mr Dillinger. Sorry.
Derek struts away like a man who believes he runs the world — or at
least the frozen foods aisle.
Sophie exhales. Her fingers twitch.
In the brief lull before the next customer, she grabs a discarded receipt
and a stubby pencil. She sketches — fast, instinctive.
A necklace takes shape. Not just jewellery — art. A waterfall of
diamonds, imagined in graphite.
The receipt becomes platinum in her mind.
DEREK (O.S.)
What on earth are those, Miss Smith?
Sophie jumps, nearly knocking over a chewing‑gum display.
Derek snatches the receipt, squinting at the delicate lines.
SOPHIE
Oh… just some sketches. Designs. They’re in my head and I didn’t
want to forget—
Derek laughs — a sharp, mocking bark that turns heads.
DEREK
Jewellery? Give me a break.
Look where you are.
Look who you are.
Stop daydreaming and serve the customers. Or else.
He crumples the receipt and drops it into her bin.
DEREK
You’re a checkout girl, Sophie. Act like it.
He walks off.
Sophie stares at the bin. Something inside her cracks — and hardens.
EXT. BUS STOP – EVENING
Rain spits against the pavement. Sophie stands alone, clutching her bag,
the “Superstore Blues” heavy on her shoulders.
A rusted hatchback screeches to a stop.
GEORGE BELL (22), her boyfriend, honks without looking up from his phone.
Sophie climbs in. The car smells of stale chips and petrol.
GEORGE
You’re late. I’m starving.
And don’t say you’re tired — all you do is sit on your backside and
scan tins all day.
Sophie turns to the window.
The Sussex coastline blurs past, grey and unforgiving.
Rain streaks the glass.
She thinks of the crumpled receipt.
Of Derek’s laugh.
Of George’s voice.
Of her parents’ doubt.
They all think she’s small.
They all think she’s nothing.
Sophie’s reflection stares back at her — tired, but burning.
SOPHIE (V.O.)
One day…
I won’t be looking at the rain through a cracked window.
I’ll be watching it from the backseat of a Bentley.
Draped in my own diamonds.
The rain intensifies — but Sophie’s eyes shine brighter.
CUT TO BLACK.
SCENE
2 - THE
GLASS CEILING
INT.
SMITH COTTAGE – EVENING
The front door GROANS shut — a heavy, weary sound that mirrors SOPHIE
SMITH’s mood. She tosses her damp coat over the banister, Tesco’s
fluorescent lights still haunting her vision.
Her stomach growls.
She hovers over a plate of cold toast, chewing mechanically.
The door opens again.
KATHERINE
SMITH enters — stiff, tired, hands stained with decades of factory
oil.
PETER
SMITH follows, boots dusted with construction grit, high‑vis
vest hanging open.
Despite everything, Sophie brightens.
SOPHIE
Mum, Dad! I’m so glad you’re home.
Katherine leans against the counter, rubbing her temples.
KATHERINE
You look peaked, Sophie. Rough shift?
Sophie exhales — a fragile mix of anger and hope.
SOPHIE
It’s Derek.
He told me today not to think.
To forget I even have ambitions.
He wants me to be a machine.
Peter pulls out a chair. The screech of wood on lino slices through the
quiet.
PETER
Now, Sophie, don’t get your back up.
I saw Derek
at the Alexandra
Arms last night.
He says you’re distracted.
You’ve got a steady wage now. Commitments.
Why throw that away for a bit of pride?
Sophie’s eyes flash.
SOPHIE
It’s not pride, Dad.
It’s my life.
Katherine reaches out — not for Sophie, but to straighten a coaster.
A tiny gesture of control in a world that offers her none.
KATHERINE
Your dad is right, darling.
People like us… we don’t get the mansions and the fancy cars.
We’re not the stars of the show.
We build the stage. We sweep the floor.
We work hard, pay our taxes, and do what we’re told.
It’s safer that way.
Sophie’s voice cracks — raw, desperate.
SOPHIE
But I’m good!
I have ideas that could change everything for us.
She pulls a worn leather portfolio from her bag and spreads her sketches
across the grease‑stained table.
The drawings glow under the kitchen light —
golden filigree like frozen sunlight,
necklaces that move like the ocean,
rings that look like they were forged from stardust.
They don’t belong in this kitchen.
They belong in Paris.
Katherine looks at them — just for a moment — then looks away, as if
the beauty stings.
KATHERINE
Yes, dear. Very pretty.
But it’s just a pipe dream.
You’ve been listening to Uncle Harry again, haven’t you?
SOPHIE
Yes.
And Uncle Harry says I’m better at designing gold
art than some of the people he’s seen in Cartier’s.
Make the Aztecs
proud.
De Beers, Chopard, Hatton Garden — weep.
At “Cartier,” Peter throws his arms up — a gesture of total
dismissal.
He doesn’t speak.
He just walks out, boots thudding toward the lounge.
A door closes.
A metaphor slams shut.
Katherine pats Sophie’s hand — gentle, but resigned.
KATHERINE
Go to sleep, Sophie.
You’re tired.
You’ll feel more sensible in the morning.
She follows Peter out.
Sophie stands alone in the dim kitchen.
She looks at her sketches — glowing softly under the cheap bulb.
They don’t look like pipe dreams.
They look like a map.
A map to a world she hasn’t reached yet.
A world she refuses to stop believing in.
FADE OUT.
SCENE
3 - THE BREAKING POINT
INT.
SMITH FAMILY KITCHEN – LATE AFTERNOON
A spotless, modest kitchen. Everything in its place — except for the
industrial-grade jewellery pliers gleaming on the table like forbidden
treasure.
CLOSE ON:
The pliers. Cold. Precise. Surgical.
SOPHIE
SMITH (19, creative, quietly fierce) stares at them with reverence.
Her mother, KATHERINE
SMITH (50s, practical to a fault), enters with folded laundry. She
freezes.
SOPHIE
(soft, hopeful)
Mum… I hope you won’t mind… I’ll need to owe you rent for a couple
of weeks.
Katherine’s expression hardens — a slow, devastating shift.
KATHERINE
Sophie, we talked about this. No more “masterpieces.” No more risking
your income for pipe dreams.
Sophie’s eyes ignite.
SOPHIE
But Derek
Dillinger made me so cross! He said my ideas were worthless. I had to
show him there’s more to life than spreadsheets. And these tools were on
special offer — it was a sign.
Katherine doesn’t respond. She turns sharply and marches out.
INT. LOUNGE – CONTINUOUS
PETER
SMITH (50s, exhausted, permanently irritated) slumps in his armchair,
staring at the TV like it owes him money.
Katherine enters like a storm cloud.
KATHERINE
Pete. Sophie can’t make the rent. She’s spent it on pliers and wire.
Peter’s face reddens instantly.
PETER
She what?
He launches out of the chair and barrels toward the kitchen.
INT. KITCHEN – CONTINUOUS
Peter looms over the table, pointing at the tools like they’re
contraband.
PETER
What’s all this, young lady?
SOPHIE
It’s for the business, Dad! Fashion jewellery. High concept, accessible
luxury — I showed you the sketches!
PETER
What business? You don’t have a business! You have a pile of scrap metal
and a hole where your rent money should be.
(beat)
You will leave this house.
SOPHIE
Dad—
PETER
Get out. Now.
Silence. Sophie doesn’t cry. Her jaw sets, her eyes sharpen.
NARRATION (V.O.)
If the world wanted her to be a Cinderella, fine — but she was going to
forge her own glass slippers.
INT. SOPHIE’S BEDROOM – EVENING
Sophie packs with surgical precision.
Jewellery kit first — wrapped in soft scarves like precious cargo.
She dials her phone.
INTERCUT – SOPHIE / GEORGE’S BEDROOM
GEORGE (20, emotionally unavailable gamer) is mid-raid, headset on,
controller clicking furiously.
SOPHIE
George? Can you pick me up? Mum and Dad are being… them.
GEORGE
Can’t it wait? I’m finally beating Chip from down the road.
SOPHIE
George, please.
He sighs dramatically.
EXT. SUBURBAN STREET – NIGHT
George’s battered hatchback pulls up. Sophie climbs in, suitcase in tow.
INT. GEORGE’S CAR – CONTINUOUS
George drives, eyes glued to the road.
GEORGE
What’s in the suitcase? You look like you’re running away to join the
circus.
SOPHIE
Just drive. My parents kicked me out.
The car slows… then nearly stops.
GEORGE
They what?
SOPHIE
Can I crash at yours? Just for tonight?
George looks at her like she’s asked for a kidney.
GEORGE
What? No. Sophie, you’re nothing but trouble. You and these big,
ridiculous ideas. I thought you were an asset — someone who’d make my
life easier. But this? This is a mess. We’re done.
Sophie blinks — stunned, frozen.
SOPHIE
Can you at least drive me to Uncle Henry’s?
GEORGE
That eccentric old hermit? No way. I have things to do.
(beat)
Get out.
EXT. STREET – CONTINUOUS
The door slams. George speeds off, splashing a puddle across Sophie’s
boots.
Rain begins — heavy, cinematic, merciless.
Sophie stands alone under a streetlamp, suitcase at her side, drenched but
unbroken.
She pulls out her phone. Her thumb hovers… then taps.
INTERCUT – SOPHIE / UNCLE HENRY’S WORKSHOP
A ticking clock. The faint meow of a cat.
UNCLE
HENRY (late 60s, eccentric, brilliant) answers.
SOPHIE
(voice trembling)
Uncle… I’m standing in the rain. Freezing. Can you pick me up, please?
A warm, raspy chuckle.
UNCLE HENRY
In the rain, you say? That’s where the best stories start, Sophie. Stay
put. I’m coming.
EXT. STREET – NIGHT
Sophie grips her suitcase handle.
Rain pours.
Her eyes burn with new resolve.
NARRATION (V.O.)
She was down, but she wasn’t out. The tools were in the bag. The ideas
were in her head. And the fire was back in her eyes.
FADE OUT.
SCENE
4 - THE DARK NIGHT
EXT.
SUBURBAN STREET – NIGHT
A torrential downpour performs against the pavement like a tap-dancing
orchestra.
SOPHIE SMITH (Bright-eyed but currently mascara-smeared and heartbroken)
stands alone with a single battered suitcase. She looks like a drowned
kitten who tried to audition for a perfume commercial and got caught in a
monsoon.
Her phone buzzes weakly.
On screen: GEORGE: “We’re done. Sorry.”
The battery icon flashes red.
Sophie exhales, a tiny, pathetic squeak of disbelief.
Then—
A cheerful mechanical heartbeat cuts through the storm.
PUTT-PUTT-PUTT-PUTT.
Two round headlights glow like friendly cartoon eyes.
SOPHIE
(whispering, hopeful)
Please be him…
The vintage VW
CAMPER
VAN rolls into view—painted in unapologetic primary colours, like a
loaf of bread designed by a children’s TV presenter.
The door CREAKS open.
INT. BUTTERCUP VAN – CONTINUOUS
Warm light spills out. The cabin smells of sawdust, peppermint, and old
leather.
HENRY HEATHCLIFFE (50s, beard like a friendly mountain king, eyes
twinkling with mischief) beams at her.
HENRY
Jump in, love! It’s a bit moist out there, isn’t it?
Sophie scrambles inside, sneakers squeaking. She shivers violently.
Henry immediately wraps her in a giant woolly towel—transforming her
into a shivering burrito.
SOPHIE
(muffled)
Thanks, Uncle.
Henry shifts the van into gear with a CLUNK that vibrates through the
seats.
HENRY
Don’t tell me anything yet. First—home. Second—hot chocolate.
Starbucks signature. Extra whipped cream. And those ridiculous chocolate
shavings that cost more than petrol.
A tiny smile escapes Sophie.
SOPHIE
Could I ever.
The van putt-putts into the night like a cheerful rescue mission.
THE SANCTUARY OF SPARKS
INT. HENRY’S HOUSE/WORKSHOP – LATER
Henry’s home is part cottage, part industrial wonderland.
Custom car skeletons. Metal sculptures. Tools arranged like art pieces.
It’s chaotic, magical, and humming with creative energy.
Sophie emerges from the spare room wearing oversized sweatpants and a
borrowed hoodie.
The kitchen is steaming.
Henry hands her a comically large mug of hot chocolate—practically a
cauldron.
HENRY
Pizza’s on the way. Now—level with me. What’s the damage?
Sophie takes a long sip. Courage in liquid form.
SOPHIE
I got sacked from Tesco.
Mum and Dad kicked me out. And George…
(beat)
George doesn’t want a girlfriend who lives in a suitcase.
Henry bursts into a booming laugh that rattles the copper pots.
HENRY
All in one night? That’s a hat-trick, Soph! Most people spread that much
misery over a decade!
Sophie blinks—then laughs too, despite herself.
SOPHIE
It’s statistically impressive, right?
Henry’s expression softens.
HENRY
But your folks? Why’d they throw you out?
Sophie hesitates.
SOPHIE
Because I spent my savings on tools. Jewellery tools. They said I was
chasing a fairy tale instead of a pension.
Henry’s eyebrows shoot up.
HENRY
Tools, eh? I like tools. Tools are honest.
(show me gesture)
Let’s see the damage.
THE BIG REVEAL
Sophie pulls out her sketchbook—wrapped in layers of plastic
like a sacred relic.
Henry flips through it.
His rough, calloused fingers turn the pages with surprising gentleness.
Silence.
Rain patters softly against the windows.
He stops on a page:
A delicate architectural necklace—frozen starlight in silver.
Equal parts Legally
Blonde ambition and Cartier elegance.
HENRY
(awed)
Soph… these aren’t doodles.
He looks up, eyes wide.
HENRY (CONT’D)
Is this original?
SOPHIE
Of course. I saw the pattern in a puddle and… had to draw it.
Henry studies her—really studies her.
He sees the spark. The raw talent. The diamond in the rough.
HENRY
Your parents are crazy.
And George? He was a user model—shiny exterior, no engine.
You’re better off without the dead weight.
He taps the necklace sketch.
HENRY (CONT’D)
You believe in yourself, Sophie Smith.
Because if you can make this…
You can build an empire.
DING-DONG!
HENRY
(grinning)
Pizza!
INT. HENRY’S LIVING ROOM – LATER
Sophie and Henry sit on the floor, eating pepperoni slices, watching an
old movie.
The wind howls outside, but inside—warmth, laughter, possibility.
Sophie leans back, a new light in her eyes.
SOPHIE (V.O.)
The dark night wasn’t the end.
It was just the darkness needed to see the sparks.
FADE OUT.
SCENE
5 - TESCO TURNAROUND
EXT.
SCENE
6 - HER UNCLE'S WORKSHOP
EXT.
SCENE
7 - A DOUBLE LIFE
EXT.
SCENE
8 - THE PARTY PIECE
INT.
SCENE
9 - THE JEALOUS BOSS
FADE
SCENE
10 - THE DIGITAL PIVOT
FADE
SCENE
11 - THE SCALING CRISIS
FADE
SCENE
12 - THE FIRST FLAGSHIP
FADE
SCENE
13 - THE GLOBAL EMPIRE
FADE
SCENE
14 - THE PLC TRANSITION
FADE
SCENE
15 - THE PARIS ENCOUNTER
FADE
SCENE
16 - THE MORNING SHOW
FADE
SCENE
17 - THE AUDACITY OF GHOSTS
FADE
SCENE
18 - THE GRACEFUL GOODBYE
FADE
SCENE
19 - THE BENTLEY MOMENT
FADE
SCENE
20 - THE PROPOSAL
FADE
SCENE
21 - THE ROYAL WEDDING
FADE
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AND THEY ALL LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER -
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THE END
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SCRIPT
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DESCRIPTION
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PART
I - The Rough Cut (The Beginning) - Focus: Sophie’s
struggle, the toxic environment, and the catalyst for change.
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CHAPTER
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SCRIPT
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The
Superstore Blues: Sophie’s daily life at Tesco in
Eastbourne. We see her talent for sketching designs on the
back of receipts, Derek Dillinger, and George Smith’s
dismissive attitude.
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CHAPTER
2
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2
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The
Glass Ceiling: Sophie shares her dreams of mansions and
Bentleys with her parents; they shut her down, telling her
"people like us" don't get those things.
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CHAPTER
3
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3
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The
Breaking Point: Sophie misses rent because she spent her spare
cash on jewelry tools. Her parents kick her out; George sees
she’s "no longer an asset" and dumps her in the
rain.
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CHAPTER
4
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4
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The
Dark Night: Homeless and heartbroken, Sophie finds a temporary
bed and wallows in grief, believing George and her parents
were right.
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CHAPTER
5
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5
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The
Tesco Turnaround: Sophie meets Phoebe Pratt at work. Phoebe
sees a sketch Sophie made and is blown away. The
"Bestie" bond is formed.
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CHAPTER
6
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6
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The
Uncle’s Workshop: Sophie seeks refuge at her uncle’s shop.
He hands her a torch and some silver; she discovers she is a
natural-born artisan.
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CHAPTER
7
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7
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The
Double Life: Sophie works overtime at Tesco by day and crafts
masterpieces by night. She realizes her "impossible"
dream might just be a plan.
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PART
II - Polishing the Gem (The Middle) - Focus: The rise of
the business, the betrayal, and the global expansion.
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CHAPTER
8
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8
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The
Party Piece: Sophie wears her own necklace to a local party.
Everyone thinks it’s Cartier. She takes her first three
private commissions.
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CHAPTER
9
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9
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The
Jealous Boss: Dave Dillinger notices Sophie’s glowing
confidence and the "side-hustle" money. In a fit of
petty jealousy, he fires her in front of the whole store.
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CHAPTER
10
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SCRIPT
10
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The
Digital Pivot: Phoebe takes the lead. She builds a high-end
website and uses her "internet guru" skills to make
Sophie’s designs go viral on Instagram and TikTok.
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CHAPTER
11
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11
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The
Scaling Crisis: Orders pour in from across the globe. Sophie
and Phoebe realize they can’t do it alone and begin vetting
master craftsmen to outsource the work.
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CHAPTER
12
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12
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The
First Flagship: The girls fly to London to open their first
small boutique. The contrast between Eastbourne and Mayfair is
breathtaking.
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CHAPTER
13
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13
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The
Global Empire: A montage chapter—Paris, Rome, New York.
Sophie is no longer a Tesco worker; she is the "Queen of
Fashion Jewelry."
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CHAPTER
14
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14
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The
PLC Transition: The company goes public. Sophie is officially
a billionaire, but she feels a lingering loneliness amidst the
fame.
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PART
III - The Brilliant Sparkle (The End) - Focus: New love,
facing the past, and the "Happily Ever After."
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CHAPTER
15
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15
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The
Paris Encounter: While overseeing the Paris branch, Sophie
meets Louis Martine, a world-famous actor looking for a custom
piece. The chemistry is instant.
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CHAPTER
16
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16
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The
Morning Show: Sophie appears on Good Morning Britain. Back in
Eastbourne, her parents and George watch in stunned, greedy
silence.
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CHAPTER
17
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17
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The
Audacity of Ghosts: George and her parents reach out, trying
to "reconnect" and asking for money. Sophie has to
decide how to handle her past.
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CHAPTER
18
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18
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The
Graceful Goodbye: Sophie visits Eastbourne one last time. She
doesn't yell; she simply shows them she has outgrown their
small world and chooses her new "found family."
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CHAPTER
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19
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The
Bentley Moment: Sophie finally buys the mansion and the custom
pink Bentley Fastback—her "Lady Penelope" moment.
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CHAPTER
20
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20
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The
Proposal: Louis proposes to Sophie in a setting that rivals
the beauty of her own jewelry. She realizes she has found a
man who values her, not her bank account.
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CHAPTER
21
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21
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The
Royal Wedding: A lavish ceremony with Phoebe as bridesmaid.
Sophie reflects on how far she’s come—from the Tesco
aisles to the top of the world.
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THE MAGIC DINOBOT
- From Jameson Hunter (producer), an
original TV series idea, germinated in 2016. Jimmy dreams of building a giant
robot ant as a special project, then one day his dreams come true when the robot he
has built is transformed into a living, breathing, companion. NOTE:
This story is Copyright © Jameson Hunter
Ltd, March 30 2016. All rights
reserved. You will need permission from the author to reproduce the book
cover on the right or any part of the story published on this page.
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